Better Writing Boot Camp – Session 7: Reducing Jargon
Jargon is a word or phrase that has a special meaning when
used in a particular technical field, industry, group, or situation. Jargon can
be useful shorthand, so long as you’re sure everyone you’re talking to or
writing knows and understands the precise meaning.
People often think jargon must sound technical or exotic. Legal
maxims spouted in Latin are often what folks point to when asked to define
jargon. The Latin phrase res ipsa loquitur,
for example, is exotic-sounding jargon a lawyer might use when talking about
evidence. (The phrase basically means something speaks for itself.)
But, what many folks don’t realize is that common words can
be jargon too. Take a simple word like “sheet” – depending on the context, it
can be jargon. How, you ask? If someone says, “pass me that sheet”, they might
be referring to one of (at least) four different things:
- a piece of paper
- a bed covering
- a piece of glass
- a rope
Why do people use
jargon?
As noted, jargon can function as shorthand that can save
time, which can be crucial in emergency situations. Some professionals use jargon
specifically to differentiate themselves or to exclude others. And yes, that
often means professionals judge peers and colleagues based on whether they’re
fluent with the jargon of their field.
Problems with Jargon
Using jargon can create a variety of problems, however. The
most obvious problem is when you use jargon and the person hearing it (or
reading it) doesn’t understand it. (Using res
ipsa loquitur in a non-legal document is an example.) Of course, by taking
the time to define the jargon for your audience you can solve part of the
communication problem. But, simply defining the term doesn’t address another
problem: using jargon often alienates folks, which is never a good
communication outcome.
Another problem with using jargon is that the same word or
phrase can mean different things to different people. Of course, in many
situations, there are other clues that help minimize the confusion. If you’re
standing near a photocopy machine when someone says “pass me the sheet”, you’d
realize they’re not talking about a rope. But making assumptions based on
circumstances is always dangerous.
A separate, but related problem can occur with jargon when
someone doesn’t appreciate the technical sense the speaker/writer intends. This
is more likely to happen when the jargon you are using involves common words.
Another problem with jargon that many fail to appreciate is
that jargon can be confusing even among members of the same profession. Take,
for example, a situation where a tax attorney was making a presentation at a
tax conference. One of her key arguments was that a particular transaction was
favourable because of the capital gains treatment. She didn’t realize, however,
that some lawyers in the audience were from countries where the capital gains
treatment was very different. It never occurred to her to explain how she
calculated the capital gain because she assumed all the lawyers were on the
same page. The end result was that some considered her analysis flawed because
they were mentally applying their country’s capital gains calculation.
Dealing with Jargon
Given
the name of today’s boot camp session, I believe the best way to avoid
confusion is to not use jargon. Of course, in certain situations and at certain
times, you may decide using jargon is fine, or even preferred. In those
situations, ask yourself the following:
- Will everyone understand the term is jargon?
- Will everyone understand the meaning I intend?
If the
answer to either question is no – or even “maybe not” – then take the time to
define for the audience what you mean. (If you don’t want to break up the flow,
consider providing the definition in a footnote or glossary.) I promise you, no
one will object to you setting out your meaning and you’ll enhance your
reputation as a clear communicator.
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